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StairsStairs October 5, 2008

I walked up the stairs carefully.  I moved slowly.  Even though I wanted to speak with her so desperately, I was scared and didn’t want to wake her.  It wasn’t courtesy, it was cowardice.
For some reason it suddenly became vital that I tell my mother about myself.  I had facebook: how would she react?  Angry, distrusting, disappointed?  Would she be okay with that?  I wanted to tell her how stressed I was, how much I missed her.

Yesterday she had woken me up by o Stairs
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Chapter Four: It Could Be...Chapter Four: It Could Be Worse “It’s all about how you perceive things.”

With the stress all blowing over, I finally felt free.  Maybe it was the fact that Janey had finally visited for the first time in two months or so, but something made me feel exhilarated: almost like a high, except I don’t believe in drugs.
It was a warm day in March.  I wished I hadn’t worn socks.  As soon as I thought that, I took it back.  I loved socks.
I glanced over at Janey.  She seemed more uncomfortable in the heat than I w Chapter Four: It Could Be...
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Chapter Three: I dont even...Chapter Three: I don’t even know anymore “. . . it’s just the rush of things. I suppose you barely have time to remember how to be yourself.

You get a lot of questions in your lifetime. I would bet anything that 45% of those questions would have no answer. However, people probably answer about 75% percent off all questions: 40% of the answers are because the question was for an opinion, 25% is probably because you actually had a factual answer, and 10% of the answers are probably something you made up, or thought sounded nice. If you’re arrogant enough, Chapter Three: I dont even...
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Chapter Two: A Semester AbroadChapter Two:  A Semester Abroad
“I felt detached.  I wasn’t really there. . .But where I really was, that was so much better.”

My new high school was weird.  It wasn’t the uniform, with the khaki shorts that fit me like a boy’s shorts would.  I kind of liked it.  It wasn’t my lack of friends, because I had my closest cousin, Adelynn with me; that was all I needed.
It was how little people’s opinions mattered to me.  Since my strange condition was announced to the whole school, via intercom, I Chapter Two: A Semester Abroad
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Mon Jul 28, 2008, 11:44 PM

Here are my current title options:
A Personal Story
Bottled-Fish

It is in the point of view of a character similar to me.
Lucy-Alice has a bone disease, like me, called Osteogenesis Imperfecta. She thinks dryly like I do and is sarcastic. her taste in music, books...her views on life. Basically, all her personality traits ARE mine (in some ways she'd be cooler).

Jane Eda is Lucy's best friend, based almost exactly like my best friend in real life.
Violet, Bella, and Jo, Lucy's family, are based off of my sister, mother and father.

A few future characters will also be based off of real people in my life. However, Jason the fish-clerk and others are not real. If they were based off of real people, I would tell you. If I don't say anything, they're probably pure fiction.

MOST of the scenarios Lucy goes through aren't real. However, they are VERY close to things I have been through, whilst other scenarios are things I would just like to try one day.
For Example:
Whim: Putting fish in water bottles
Real: my current relationship with my sister. Some of the things she says she really has said. But I love her and we are very close, it's just that I feel there is a rough patch
Wish: To walk through my city by myself. *notgonnahappen*
Real: Surgeries and anything health related.
Real: me moving

But just know that this is SORT of a venting thing, so please don't mock any of my emotions.
and that you should know:
Though I do make some fictional aspects to my characters, NEVER would I make a character worse than they appear in real life. I am an optimistic person and I am trying to show that there is always a bright side. I will not try and dwell on the negatives of a person, lest I can help it.

oh, and a final warning:
there WILL be grammar and tense errors: I do not have a beta and I'm only fourteen.

enjoy!

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note:
i will be posting chapter summaries before every chapter
and I MIGHT illustrate some.
and if you have title ideas, please share.

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